Conrad Miles

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Conrad Miles

Conrad Miles Eighteen Noble Miles Crest (mod will fill out) Kotemon, Lopmon Terriermon FACE CLAIM: Lon’qu ANIMANGA: Fire emblem Awkening GENDER: Male, HEIGHT: six feet, two inches. WEIGHT: one hundred and sixty six pounds. APPEARANCE Conrad likes to wear comfy and hefty clothes that cover his healthy built. He has sharp dark brown eyes, messy short black hair. He is in good shape with muscle in his arms and legs while his core is more slender. He has an intimidating face which often shows little emotions besides awkwardness and being focused on something. He is a mix of Japanese and English. LIKES Kendo The internet cold weather Swords Books animals DISLIKES Big crowds Awkwardness Loud people or places Hot weather Animals being mistreated animals POSITIVE Dutiful Respectful Smart Calm Curious  Fast learner Loves to read NEGATIVE Hasty Awkward Aloof Unlucky Overly focused Confused by social events Blunt HISTORY Conrad was born into an average family; this over-abundance of averageness might have sparked his later curiosity in life. He was smart for an infant, learning to walk and talk before many kids his age; this was to his parents a sign that there have incredibly gifted children in hand. So their put him in kindergarten at a young age. He was a fast learner, learning to spell at a young age. He loved the prise he gotten from his parents when he spelled a word, or said a hard word. It was fulfilling to him, it made him feel proud. When elementary started, he was a year younger than all the students due to starting school at a younger age. This caused a gap of being able to relate to others. So he acted older to relate with others, but it didn't work he still couldn't relate with others. Only the books he read he can relate with, these books kept him company, but he didn't mind, he liked the silence This act of maturity became his default expression, barely any emotion across his face. But her words clearly tell what he wanted to let others know, if sometime distances others. He had a very normal if lonesome elementary years, but his most favourite moment in her childhood was learning of swords and kendo, all this talk of a field he barely knew intrigued him to no ends, he wanted to know of all things kendo and swords. He started Kendo in middle school; he became very fit after a few years of doing kendo he was very good, if overly focused on it. His high school years were painfully average, nothing of interest happened. He was doing well without a bump in the road, and another few years with no friends. But one day when finishing his kendo practice he came across a cardboard box with his partner with something moving inside it moved. He thought it was a cat or dog so he went to check if the animals were okay, but he found his partner instead. It was awkward he didn't know what to say and his partner was excited to finally find him. He decided to hide him to the best of ability. The both became fast friends. MEMBER NAME: Bornlucky AGE: 19 OTHER CHARACTERS: First character ROLEPLAY SAMPLE N/A

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[Corvus]

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Hello there, and welcome to So Long Sentiment! It's always good to have new members, but before I can accept and add Conrad to the site officially, I would like to ask if you could please make a few adjustments to his bio.

✘ In his traits, could you please change "loves to read" to something along the lines of a thirst for knowledge and/or education, and "unlucky" to something else? Stating that he loves reading sounds more like a hobby than a trait, though why he loves reading would be an appropriate trait to take its place. And while it's perfectly alright for him to be unlucky, it's not a personality trait. If his bad luck caused him to become pessimistic or paranoid, however, either - or another negative as a result of his misfortune - would be acceptable.
✘ Animals are listed in both his likes and dislikes; is this an error, or does he like a specific kind of animal but dislikes another? I know it's a small thing to focus on, but it is a tad confusing to me.
✘ Most importantly, you need to add a roleplay sample to your first character. If you've seen other users opting out, it's only because they have already had a character accepted and therefore no longer need a sample - which, in itself, has no bearing on profile grading, though it gives us (and other users looking at your profile) an idea of how you write. The sample does not even need to come from a digimon site at all, just as long as you have one...and if you either haven't roleplayed before or no longer have access to any old posts you could use here, you can always make a mock post with Conrad. And hey, if you choose to go down that road, you can always re-use the post as an opener once Conrad is accepted!

There are some grammar issues and (more minor) typos that I would like to discuss, but I don't want to overwhelm you or anything so I'll save those for once you address the above points. Additionally, if for any reason you feel I'm being unfair or unreasonable, feel free to contact the main admin Ryuujin and ask for a second opinion. Once more, welcome to So Long Sentiment, and I hope we can get you accepted soon! c:

And sorry for taking so long.